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.:Complete:. by ~chargirl5000:iconchargirl5000:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


Always wondered what I missed...
That needed feel ...
That single kiss.
The need for love,
Never to go away.

Meeting you was ...
Rare and magical.

For somehow you were all I needed...
To make my heart rapidly beat.

I cry when your so far away...
Wondering if you cry to.


When no one's awake.

Sitting there just thinking...
With the only thing on my mind...

Is you.

My love to be.

One so pure.
And now...

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©2008-2009 ~chargirl5000
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ahhh this was hard to come up with...it was being so evil then i found a better way to word my feelings yay! enjoy!:heart:
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~Ghost47:iconGhost47: Apr 13, 2008, 9:47:46 PM
i love it, but one grammar fix... "i cry when *you're* so far away", versus "your". hopefully i'm being coherent... it's past my bedtime lol

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i've got a name,
and i'll spell it out for you.
~Noster7:iconNoster7: Apr 13, 2008, 9:48:17 PM
Hey! That's a nice poem!
~chargirl5000:iconchargirl5000: Apr 13, 2008, 9:48:38 PM
lol thank you! i shall fix^^

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Wanting to be someone else is a waste of the person you are. ~Kurt Cobain
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RAPE isnt SEX its A free SERVICE LOLZ! ~ Chargirl5000
*thedragonofdoom:iconthedragonofdoom: Apr 13, 2008, 9:48:45 PM
Very nice! Dammit, I wish I could write like that. >.<

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" Welcome to the lower birth, the greatest show on earth. We appear without a sound, the darkest show around. We will leave you in a daze, madness, murder, dismay. We will disappear at night with blood on the concrete." - Creature Feature
~chargirl5000:iconchargirl5000: Apr 13, 2008, 9:50:31 PM
awws thankies doom he liked it to so yey! it worked!XD

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Wanting to be someone else is a waste of the person you are. ~Kurt Cobain
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RAPE isnt SEX its A free SERVICE LOLZ! ~ Chargirl5000
*thedragonofdoom:iconthedragonofdoom: Apr 13, 2008, 9:50:56 PM
Cool! ^^

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" Welcome to the lower birth, the greatest show on earth. We appear without a sound, the darkest show around. We will leave you in a daze, madness, murder, dismay. We will disappear at night with blood on the concrete." - Creature Feature
=Sc0t1n4t0r:iconSc0t1n4t0r: Apr 13, 2008, 9:51:04 PM
yays poetry ^^

I liked the upcome of the poem ^^

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<(^o^< )do the kirby! O.o( >^o^)>

-------------dragons rule!-------------

Ai Uave a Cfagon Scifiá, Soul anc Ueafá

OMG! this is so cool! [link] [link]
~chargirl5000:iconchargirl5000: Apr 13, 2008, 9:51:12 PM
thank you!

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Wanting to be someone else is a waste of the person you are. ~Kurt Cobain
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RAPE isnt SEX its A free SERVICE LOLZ! ~ Chargirl5000
~aquadragon35:iconaquadragon35: Apr 13, 2008, 9:51:53 PM
man i like this!

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we have become scarce; all too scarce,
and no one is to blame but man...
-code:35
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